Trip to Mars

Blast! I am off to Mars in my rocket! I look out the window and all I can see is smoke. 1 week later I say to Maia we just went outside of gravity and we started to float. Going upside down and doing flips. Then it was time for bed I am sleeping on the wall to night. I hop into bed and Matilda is sleeping next to me and I said to her how long until we are at Mars? 253 day to go. That is  long way to go. 

250 days later 3 day to go. Yay! We got the marble out and threw it in the air the marble floated in the air for 3 min then it went down. Next we got a yoyo and it worked like it did on earth. We are here yay! I hopped out of the spaceship and I floated in the air. I cannot believe that am on Mars. It is awesome!! I did not think it was going to be this red and so many pot holes then I hop back into the spaceship and I got the marble and went outside and played with it.     

   

Rescue Helicopter

Key words: Rescue Helicopter, Uncle, Winch

Suddenly the Rescue Helicopter came swooping in over the sea. The wind that was made was making a lot of waves in the water. Fastly Uncle Jason jumped out of the Rescue Helicopter into the water with a rope! Then he swim over to the policemen that was in the water and he grabbed him . Next Uncle put up his hand with his palm facing up and they let the winch down. He connected him and the police man to it and the guy in the Rescue Helicopter pulled them up into the Rescue Helicopter.  

Flax Rock

Flax Rock

My favourite thing was that there were different walls to climb.

My challenging thing was that I didn't get to the top.

I am most proud of that I tried my hardest to get to the top.

Climbing up the wall

Hop on the wall says Karl. I start to climb and he says slow down. I keep climbing. I get to a point that I cannot go anymore so I say can I came down now please? I came back down and I say thank you to Karl .     

The Taste Collector

listen to ‘The taste collector’ on Audioboo

The Taste Collector

A stranger called this morning

Dressed all in white and grey

Put every taste into a bag

And threw them away.

The taste of the lollie

The taste of the corn

The  roughness of the candy

The taste of the prawn

The taste of the pasta

The taste of the flake

The taste of the end of my pencil

The taste of the baking

The taste of the pork

The niceness of the chip

The taste of the smoothie

the taste of the dip

The taste  of the raindrops

The taste of the pineapple

The taste of the kiwifruit

The taste of the juicy apple

A stranger called this morning

Her name was Dame

Left us with no taste

Life will never be the same

Tracey Ludeman

My year so far in Room 16 by Tracey

My year so far in Room 16 by Tracey

My favourite thing about being in Room 16 in 2013 is have an amazing teacher (ordinary) and class and going to camp.   

Something I would like to do next year is try from a house leader and a young leader.

My dream job would be a nurse.

Reading

The best thing about reading so far this year is Dead harry

The best thing I read this year was Justice League making connections to Shadow.

This is my favourite reading blog post is v8’s that I created. I chose it because I like doing the fotobabble.

This is my favourite reading post from someone else. I think it is awesome because she did a presentation.

Maths

The best thing about maths so far this year is mathletics.

I was most proud of learning is how to do my basic facts fast . I was proud because I was improving all the time.  

This is my favourite maths blog post that I created. I chose it because.I was really proud of it.

This is my favourite maths post from someone else I think it is awesome because she did her working out on show me.   

I am really good at is teaching other people at maths.

I want to get better at division.

Writing

The best thing about writing so far this year is always having something to write about.  

I was most proud of learning  how to put speech marks in my writing. I was proud because it make my writing better.

This is my favourite writing blog post that I created. I chose it because I really like this piece of writing.

This is my favourite writing post from someone else .I think it is awesome because she did a comic life with it.

I am really good at is making up stories.

I want to get better at is writing better stories.

Integrated Topic

My favourite part of topic has been learning about India.  I enjoyed it because it was awesome to learn about a new country.

This is my favourite topic blog post that I created. I chose it because it was really fun cooking it.

This is my favourite topic post from someone else . I think it is awesome because I like how she put a video with it.

School Involvement

Choir, juicies and moosies

How I Have Shown PRIDE

Personal  Best: Try my hardest at everything I do

Respect and Responsibility: I respect everything and everyone

Integrity: I never lie

Determination: I always want to learn

Enjoyment: I am alway having fun

Soccer Ball Poem

I am a soccer ball

I am able to roll on the ground and be kicked

I am happy when you play with me and kick me

I DO NOT like it when you leave me outside I get really dirty

I wish you would always play with me

I am always lonely I need a friend

I would like to tell my owner to clean all the time cause I always dirty.

  

By Tracey

Walkathon reflection

Reflection for walkathon  (my team leopards )    · Something I was pleased with was my team did really well because they stack together.   · I really enjoyed learning different things about my group because we need to learn lots about our team to go to camp. · Something I found hard was  thinking of our chant and keeping up with the boys. · Something that made me think was remembering our time because we  know our final time.          · Something I want to get better at is  walking faster so I can keep up           (wear better shoes )

Cat poem

My Cat by Tracey from Room16 Parkvale on Vimeo.

This is my cat poem 
Cats 
camouflaging cats 
sleep and still
purring at patterns 
pounce on predator
running and racing
Cats



  


  

My first motorbike

 Here is the link to tagxedo http://www.tagxedo.com/

This is my poem here 

I have always been lucky

When I was 5 I got my

first motorbike that was red

and it was called Sally.

I rode it every weekend I never left it.

I would always go outside and wash

my motorbike every day even if it was

sparkly clean.

When I ride my motorbike and

go fast  it feels like I’m flying in the sky.

When I ride my motorbike

and I pass another person on

there motorbike

I feel excited.

When I had Sally

my cousin had the same bike as me

but his was called lightning McQueen

because we always watched lightning McQueen in our bus.

              I still love that motor bike

Here is the recording for my poem