Tuesday, 13 May 2014

Rescue Helicopter

Key words: Rescue Helicopter, Uncle, Winch

Suddenly the Rescue Helicopter came swooping in over the sea. The wind that was made was making a lot of waves in the water. Fastly Uncle Jason jumped out of the Rescue Helicopter into the water with a rope! Then he swim over to the policemen that was in the water and he grabbed him . Next Uncle put up his hand with his palm facing up and they let the winch down. He connected him and the police man to it and the guy in the Rescue Helicopter pulled them up into the Rescue Helicopter.  


  1. Great story Tracey. You described uncle Jason's jump so well. I like the 'helicopter swooping down.' part :-)
    I love your tagxedo too!
    (Aunty Ngaio)

  2. Well done Tracey!
    Its a great piece of writing.
    There is some great descriptive words in there.

  3. Well done Tracey.
    Its a great story.
    I like how you put swooping in over the sea.
    Keep up the great work.

  4. Wow Tracey that must be great for you!
    Swooping over the sea is a great sentance.
    Keep it up!

  5. At the start your story was really good.


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