Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 25 November 2014

Walkie talkie


Tracey's Walkie Talkie Advertising from Kieren Moriarty on Vimeo.


Have you heard about the new toys the walkie talkies? I think you should advertise this product on the tv because more people watch the tv . It is much safer than the internet

First of all, I think you should put it in the ads in between the news and the kids channels. The kids will be watching the kids channel and the adults  will be watching the news and then the kid will want the walkie talkies. Do it around christmas time so the the adults will buy them for the christmas  presents.  

Second, that if it is on the internet it could put a virus on to the computer and that is not a safe way to advertise your product. You can not get viruses on the tv so it will we safe so the people will buy your product. I think that if it is on the tv it will be more safe than the internet.

Thirdly, I think that this is one of the most important one of all. Less  people will see it on the internet because not everyone has wifi or a computer to see your ad. So if you do it on the tv more people will see it and your product will be more popular.

So I think that The tv is safer, more people will see your ad and not everyone has wifi or a computer. You should put it on the tv because it is more safe and more people will see it. Put your ad on the tv it is the best way to advertise.           


   



Thursday, 23 October 2014

My Blood Story's

I was driving down the road and there was cars coming from all directions. The road was really busy and he pulled out on onto another busy road and did not look the other way and as I pulled out a car went right into the back of my car and flipped it. In the car that flipped the other car flu in the air and landed on the other side of the road and all you can see is the blood coming out of my  car. The amblience the firetruck and  the police car all came really fast to the crash. The amblience people hopped out and the woman came to me and the man went to the other car.

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One day my  boyfriend and I were driving down a country road and our car broke down. We both hopped out and had a look but we could not fix it . So I hopped back In the car and my boyfriend said to me  “Stay in here don't hop out and he walked away. I was waiting for 2 hours and then I heard a bang bang bang on the roof of my car and then I waited for another 2 hours then I hopped out and look on the roof and my boyfriend head was hanging and blood  was dripping out of the head.

Friday, 4 July 2014

Trip to Mars

Blast! I am off to Mars in my rocket! I look out the window and all I can see is smoke. 1 week later I say to Maia we just went outside of gravity and we started to float. Going upside down and doing flips. Then it was time for bed I am sleeping on the wall to night. I hop into bed and Matilda is sleeping next to me and I said to her how long until we are at Mars? 253 day to go. That is  long way to go. 

250 days later 3 day to go. Yay! We got the marble out and threw it in the air the marble floated in the air for 3 min then it went down. Next we got a yoyo and it worked like it did on earth. We are here yay! I hopped out of the spaceship and I floated in the air. I cannot believe that am on Mars. It is awesome!! I did not think it was going to be this red and so many pot holes then I hop back into the spaceship and I got the marble and went outside and played with it.     

   

Tuesday, 10 June 2014

Waka Ride

Reflection for Waka ride
Something I was pleased with was the my class all paddled together because if we didn't we will not go forward and back.
I really enjoyed learning was that to turn the boat because we turn ourselves around.


Something I found hard was to keep paddling because my hands were sore.  
Something that made me think was the words  and what the mean.
Something I want to get better at is keeping in time to get better I can follow the person it front of me.


Waka leader: Jim Edwards
Get ready- Kia riti
Work together and maintaining the rhythm - Tokihi
Paddle- Hoe
Stop- Whakamutu
Ta papa- Lean forward.
Tipuna (carved on waka) - ancestors (people that have came before)
Tūmatauenga - God of War


We stopped paddling and held our hoe up straight to sky. Saluting to Tūmatauenga, we did our best pūkana. Blaah! Then Jim said Kia riti and we put our paddles down . Next he said tokihi and we chant back tokihi and paddle.




Say cheese 

Waka parked up

Jim talking to us

Turning around 

Paddle paddle paddle



4 friends

This is the presentation that Room 6 made.

Friday, 30 May 2014

The Hot Air Balloon

This is Sophie's story about the hot air balloon







Thursday, 29 May 2014

My Learning - May 2014




Something I enjoyed was the Mr M helping me in all my school work.
Something I want to learn is more about the stars.

Wednesday, 28 May 2014

Homework Game Review

For homelinks this week was to do a game review we had to do one of these's games off our class Symbaloo


The one that I did was Sentence shooter. First you read the sentence then you pick which one you think is the one. There is . ,!, or ?. Then you click on it and it will shoot the one that you click on. 



  





Tuesday, 13 May 2014

Rescue Helicopter

Key words: Rescue Helicopter, Uncle, Winch


Suddenly the Rescue Helicopter came swooping in over the sea. The wind that was made was making a lot of waves in the water. Fastly Uncle Jason jumped out of the Rescue Helicopter into the water with a rope! Then he swim over to the policemen that was in the water and he grabbed him . Next Uncle put up his hand with his palm facing up and they let the winch down. He connected him and the police man to it and the guy in the Rescue Helicopter pulled them up into the Rescue Helicopter.  




Thursday, 17 April 2014

Flax Rock



Flax Rock


My favourite thing was that there were different walls to climb.
My challenging thing was that I didn't get to the top.
I am most proud of that I tried my hardest to get to the top.



Climbing up the wall
Hop on the wall says Karl. I start to climb and he says slow down. I keep climbing. I get to a point that I cannot go anymore so I say can I came down now please? I came back down and I say thank you to Karl .     
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Monday, 24 March 2014

Reading Challenge

This is the dog droid that Maia and me made for are reading challenge we read the book robot challenge then we had to summarise then we made our own one. We made the dog droid because our group name is droid. 


Robot Challenge as told to Karen Phelps
WALT summarise


Key words:
  • Competition - RoboCup - Robot Theatre - Dance (1 - 2 minutes)
  • Design robots
  • Students (4 Y5/6), team
  • Computer (brain)
  • Interlocking blocks
  • Program (laptop) - sequence of movements - mat - floor space
  • Music, costumes, props
  • Problem solving
  • Second place “doing something we’re all passionate about”


Summary

Four students created two robots for the RoboCup theatre competition. They had to design, make, and program their robot to dance using computers. Then they chose music, costumes and props. There was a lot of problem solving. They came second place “doing something we’re all passionate about”.



Saturday, 22 March 2014

Fun swimming sports

Fun Swimming Sports


I see people cheering for team mates. There are adults watching there, kids swimming in the water and I see them throwing the pennies in the water. I hear the people yelling and I hear Miss Hill and Mr G talking on the loudspeaker. I taste the wind going in my mouth. I am touching the blocks that I am putting in the bucket for my house, Pukeko!!! I smell the wet towels and the strong smell of chlorine from the pool.

Friday, 15 November 2013

Pen pal letter #2

This is my pen pal letter to Alex she lives in America in the class we all have a diffident pen pal.


Dear Alex
Hi how are you I am really good. My family is my mum’s name is Kim my dad’s name is Paul and my sister’s name is Emma I have a dog called Tess. I am a tomboy as well I ride a motorbike my Dad (Paul),my sister Emma And I go to different places to ride our motorbikes. I like to play soccer my team has won every game in the session and came first in our first tournament and in our second tournament we came runners up. My last name is 7 letters long it is Ludeman.I am in room 16 my teacher is Mr Moriarty. Here is a link to my blog if you are allowed to please comment pridetraceyl.blogspot.co.nz   

My best friend is Kyrah, My school name is Parkvale school, my favorite color is orange my favorite food is lollies my favorite animal is a cow.

We have just been to kayaking and yachting it was really fun. My team was Lily and Imaan but I also went with Olivia in the yacht and in the kayak I went with Bree.  


Here are some for you
Do you play a sport?
What is your favorite food?
What is our favorite animal?
Is there 121 class room in your school?                            

Tuesday, 29 October 2013

My year so far in Room 16 by Tracey

My year so far in Room 16 by Tracey


My favourite thing about being in Room 16 in 2013 is have an amazing teacher (ordinary) and class and going to camp.   

Something I would like to do next year is try from a house leader and a young leader.


My dream job would be a nurse.


Reading


The best thing about reading so far this year is Dead harry


The best thing I read this year was Justice League making connections to Shadow.


This is my favourite reading blog post is v8’s that I created. I chose it because I like doing the fotobabble.


This is my favourite reading post from someone else. I think it is awesome because she did a presentation.


Maths


The best thing about maths so far this year is mathletics.


I was most proud of learning is how to do my basic facts fast . I was proud because I was improving all the time.  


This is my favourite maths blog post that I created. I chose it because.I was really proud of it.


This is my favourite maths post from someone else I think it is awesome because she did her working out on show me.   


I am really good at is teaching other people at maths.
I want to get better at division.


Writing


The best thing about writing so far this year is always having something to write about.  


I was most proud of learning  how to put speech marks in my writing. I was proud because it make my writing better.


This is my favourite writing blog post that I created. I chose it because I really like this piece of writing.


This is my favourite writing post from someone else .I think it is awesome because she did a comic life with it.


I am really good at is making up stories.
I want to get better at is writing better stories.


Integrated Topic


My favourite part of topic has been learning about India.  I enjoyed it because it was awesome to learn about a new country.


This is my favourite topic blog post that I created. I chose it because it was really fun cooking it.


This is my favourite topic post from someone else . I think it is awesome because I like how she put a video with it.


School Involvement


Choir, juicies and moosies
How I Have Shown PRIDE


Personal  Best: Try my hardest at everything I do
Respect and Responsibility: I respect everything and everyone
Integrity: I never lie
Determination: I always want to learn
Enjoyment: I am alway having fun



Wednesday, 18 September 2013

Yachting Day 1

Bree and I made go animate about yachting day 1

Here is my video hope you like it
Yachting Reflection Day 1 on GoAnimate


Reflection for Yachting
Something I was pleased with was that everyone had a turn because some people didn't say no when they were asked to take out other students.
I really enjoyed learning how a yacht works because I did not know how to.


Something I found hard was trying to not hit other boats  because I didn’t want to crash.


Something that made me think was how to find which way the wind was coming from because we were not allowed to go against the wind.
Something I want to get better at is being brave in the yacht I can not be so scared. 
         

Friday, 13 September 2013

Cooking with Hemani's mum doing parota

Hemani's mum come in to room 16 and did some cooking with as she cooked parota with as it was really yummy here is the method ,what you need and ingredients. I helped make it . It was really fun!!!  



Ingredients



  • Cauliflower
  • Onions
  • Potatoes
  • Coriander
  • Coriander powder
  • Wheat Flour
  • Water
  • Flour
  • Cummin seeds
  • salt



Equipment:
  • Hot plate ( Tiva )
  • Plate
  • bowl


Method



Step 1: Prepare the ingredient


Step 2: Grab the 2 potatoes wash them and then put them in the microwave for 15 minutes.


Step 3: While the potatoes are warming up cut the cauliflower into small pieces same with the
coriander.


Step 4: Cut the onion into small


Step 5: Get the potatoes out of the microwave and peel them. And after mash with the masher.


Step 6: Mix the cauliflower and the coriander onions and potatoes together.


Step 7: Add salt and coriander powder then mix again.


Step 8: Mix the wheat flower and the water together to make it kind of like dough.


Step 9: Take a handful of dough and roll up into a 3D circle.


Step 10: Put the rolled up dough in the plain dry flour.


Step 11: Roll pin the dough out a into a little flat circle.


Step 12: Put a handful of the mixture into the flat circle.


Step 13: Pinch each side of the dough together so that the mixture is tucked inside.


Step 14: Roll the mixture and the dough together outwards with the roll pin.


Step 15: Then put the dough on the hot plate ( Tiva )


Step 16: Wait till it is warm or hot and eat!





Here is some of the photos 

















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