Blast! I am off to Mars in my rocket! I look out the window and all I can see is smoke. 1 week later I say to Maia we just went outside of gravity and we started to float. Going upside down and doing flips. Then it was time for bed I am sleeping on the wall to night. I hop into bed and Matilda is sleeping next to me and I said to her how long until we are at Mars? 253 day to go. That is long way to go.
250 days later 3 day to go. Yay! We got the marble out and threw it in the air the marble floated in the air for 3 min then it went down. Next we got a yoyo and it worked like it did on earth. We are here yay! I hopped out of the spaceship and I floated in the air. I cannot believe that am on Mars. It is awesome!! I did not think it was going to be this red and so many pot holes then I hop back into the spaceship and I got the marble and went outside and played with it.
250 days later 3 day to go. Yay! We got the marble out and threw it in the air the marble floated in the air for 3 min then it went down. Next we got a yoyo and it worked like it did on earth. We are here yay! I hopped out of the spaceship and I floated in the air. I cannot believe that am on Mars. It is awesome!! I did not think it was going to be this red and so many pot holes then I hop back into the spaceship and I got the marble and went outside and played with it.
WOW I really like the starting of your story great work :) #
ReplyDeleteTe Meke Tracey,
ReplyDeleteLove the words in the image,
It really connected to your story.
Ka Pai Keep it up!!!